Opening Of The Paper

Your opening must keep to the question first of all you’ve got to find at what the question is and then I told them that in every essay question you will get there will be two guidelines there will be topic words which tell you what to write about and there will be directives which will tell you how to write about it so once you know what the topic is you are halfway there you will be completely there if you know exactly what you have to do in your discussion of that topic now it’s so it is so important I mean you can write four pages on irrelevance and fail from moment you decide what the topic is every sentence every word every punctuation Matt must relate to that topic. Find out more about introduction in essay at Edusson.

I used to give a little exemplum in my pre university course i would say supposing a young lover young newlywed said to a husband darling the roof is leaking now really would that husband reply something like this I’ll Ruth’s now there are many kinds of roofs roofs have been in existence for many years there are flat roofs and sloping roofs well I don’t think that marriage would last too long in that case so it’s just common sense keep to the question now there are two kinds of communication basically Vera I’m sorry what a foolish thing to say there are many many kinds but I want to speak about two pounds when you speak you write on the air I’m trying to demonstrate that can but I’m looking for what I just said I can’t find it anywhere because it’s not concrete if I make a mistake i can smile and say I’m sorry that wasn’t right or if I am if I have an ungrammatical statement I can still smile and hope the set up to something but it it may in some cases if I’m applying for a job however it would not be very good but anyway when you write on a year or in other words speech you can change it it’s easy you can I’m sorry that was not right.

But when you put it down it’s there it’s there has praised for you or indictment for you one of them one of my wonderfully varied jobs in a high school before university teaching was to get to know the year 7 students the new arrivals in the high school now educational authorities were very concerned about the gap in performance between year 6 in the primary school in year 7 and 8 in the high school it’s a big shift for children more than one teacher and so many and you all know the differences anyway that was why I had this job of game to know the children and you know what i did i got them to write me an essay i got them to tell me about themselves and what they hoped would be their destination at high school.

Creative Risks in Essay

Creative risks that students might take anything along those lines I think for creative risks especially if you put it the beginning of the essay or at the end of the essay I mean it doesn’t always work but I think that’s a good general rule I’m like if you put it in the middle of that say that’s where the heart of the essay is and that’s where you are learning the most but if you if you decide to put a creative risk if you can somehow put it into the introductory especially the first lot the first line is really important because that’s what captures the reader and if you decide to put news like poetry poetic writing or poetic styles. Read more articles on creative risks at

If you put in the first sentence or the last sentence then that’s really strong because it is going to capture the reader or it is going to leave the reader with a certain type of impression if it is at the end yeah and I think if you are gonna do that just keep in mind to kind of tie it back to your essay and the point that you are trying to make you know don’t put a quote in there from a famous person just for the sake of inserting a quote right or you know very intellectual right but it doesn’t come just because you wanna just keep that in mind that you are doing that kind of actually breaks up the flow of what you are trying to achieve and convey yeah but I think like travel is your point um you know if you want to your first sentence is only like three words long or it is quote like someone you are something your father said to you or something you know that like it is not normally how you would start a high school essay I think that’s fine as long as you have people look it over see if it is an appropriate creative risk and take the safeguards and that there’s a than why you did it like yeah save so much about the club about having a quote.

What’s the reason behind having that quote and are we learning about you in the process I think that’s that’s gonna be important part about the whole essay that flow and the reader it is not looking for a thesis you know in school we are writing 500 essays and the end of the introductory paragraph there’s the thesis nobody’s gonna know a mission officer I don’t think I’ve been how to work in the admissions office I’ve been in college but I don’t think your guys are looking for a thesis statement you know don’t don’t be afraid to have questions unanswered as long as you uh you know really try to if it makes sense in your SAT yeah okay um see so we are approaching the end of our time now you know we’ve talked about a lot of different things today.

Brainstorm in Essay Writing

Brainstorming is an important skill that you must require it’s a prerequisite to lateral thinking that is thinking of various things simultaneously it promotes creativity and innovation V humans B V human beings tend to think sequentially therefore here I have not written like this my first thought my second thought my third thought I have written like this here the force here is the second here is the third okay I have not written them sequentially because we human beings tend to think sequentially by doing so we restrict our creativity we must therefore acquire the art of literal and non sequential thinking okay first of all this requires a good understanding of the topic dwell on the topic that you have chosen and till the time you grasp it fully okay.

Get into the shoes of the examiner and ask yourself why the particular topic has been given understand its context and concerns now start writing down any key words or phrases associated with the topic that come to your mind don’t try to channelize the flow of ideas let your thinking go wild jot down even the weirdest of the ideas keep thinking fast and don’t stop because just write like this first thought second thought third thought just won’t stop keep writing keep thinking fast and don’t get stuck up anywhere add this stage don’t classify okay random it should be random when I’m saying random and again and again for focusing on the word random because if you it it won’t be random it will hamper your creativeness and your innovativeness okay so don’t spoil your creativity random means random then it has to get sequence that is the next stage so first at the first stage keep it totally random okay so next part this one we discussed basic brainstorming next is committed brainstorming once you have jot down the poi points in a random manner then after that once you’re done with the random thoughts you have to classify and system our system.

I’ll systemize your random jottings after you have gathered sufficient number of ideas start linking your random thoughts classify in them different groups for example okay wait this is these are my random thoughts okay now I have to classify them now I feel a if these two points I can keep them under the heading one D and C I can keep them under hiding too this is how you will classify them and after classic grouping them under up under all same headings I will prioritize them how will I prioritize them I will see that yes this point I have to write first this point I have to write on the second number this point I have to write on the third number now maybe it came as a fourth in my mind but I will write it in the third manner I hope I’m not confusing you so what I am telling you that after brainstorming and random jotting the points for example could be suppose there is a topic called global peace and you have made certain points like threats to global peace meaning of global peace why peace is necessary what has been done.

Personal Statement Advice from Teachers

It’s hard to write the personal statement because it’s a bit of page or page and a half and you know the three most common topics or at least the three topics that are really important to high school students or perhaps that have impacted their lives in the most profound way. Would be, you know, death of a loved one, or friend moving, or divorce and those are pretty heavy-duty topics and there have been outstanding authors over the years who have tried to approach those topics and have had a difficult time in a 500-page book and now we’re asking a seventeen-year-old to reflect on that in 750 words or less.

So it’s a it’s a great challenge to write the personal statement I think that if you don’t feel that you can trust the admissions officer to safeguard your secrets or to see you in a vulnerable light you’re going to miss an opportunity for the admissions officer to get to know you as well as he or she possibly could. One of the biggest mistakes that students make on their personal statement is to sort of make an embellished resume so we’ve already seen your resume, we’ve already seen you know what you’ve done, what you’re interested in.

Don’t use the very few words you have to tell us about yourself only to talk about what you do. I think the personal statement is sometimes thought of as a way to show yourself off and in reality what it is for us is a way to understand why you do the things you do, how those things impact you, how those experiences have shaped your worldview. One of my pet peeves when I read personal statement is when students describe an event without explaining the significance of it and so if you tell me for example about a snowstorm, okay sure, but um you know what does that tell me about you.

Last year I read the personal statement about a student or that a student wrote about his grandfather and it was very well written. Lots of wonderful imagery and good punctuation and grammar but by the end of the personal statement. I wanted to admit the students grandfather because it was all about him and so I didn’t learn anything about the student in that personal statement and so in that case although it was a great personal statement it was not great for this purpose students who were creative will sometimes think that they should have a more visually appealing personal statement and so they’ll create their personal statement to be in the shape of something that represents who they are you know it can be hard to read an essay that’s shaped like a chalice. Let’s say I’ve also seen students take the approach of a letter to a roommate or their presidential acceptance speech that they’re going to give down the road. Thanking Georgetown for the opportunity and I think sometimes the ploy can take over the personal statement and you can’t get past sort of the tool that they’ve used and you don’t actually get to the students.

I think it’s better to write a simple heartfelt personal statement than to try to put too much time into crafting something that you think will stand out or catch our attention. I kind of understand where students are coming from when they say let me mention all these different things but I try to encourage students to sort of hone in maybe on one experience on one extracurricular and use that as a lens through which we can get to see the way that you think the way that your world operates and also who you might be on our campus.

Persuasive Essay Outline—Minimum Criteria

Paragraph #1 Introduction of Persuasive Essay (40+ words)
Introduce topic, author, text+ 2 sent. summary of text

Thesis Statement (3+ sentences)
Take a stand on your topic
(topic +opinion about topic+ 3 reasons that support opinion)

Odysseus and his crew are responsible for their misfortunes because(reason #1)________________,(reason #2),______________________, &(reason#3)_______________________________________________.

Paragraph #2, 3, &4 Body Paragraphs—Repeat for ALL body paragraphs
#1 sentence Topic sentence ­­gives first reason that supports thesis #2 sentence Concrete detail­starts with For Example(lead into example)

#3 sentence Commentary—explain how your example proves your point—starts with—This shows that…
#4 sentence Commentary—elaborate­­say more about sent. 3
#5 sentence Concrete Detail—start with In addition(lead into example)
#6 sentence Commentary—explain how your example proves your point—starts with—This shows that…
#7 sentence Commentary—elaborate­­say more about sent. 6
#8 sentence Concluding sentence—closing commentary about this point  starts with—As a result, OR Because of this,

Paragraph #5 Concluding Paragraph of Persuasive Essay (40+ words, all commentary)
Summarize the opposing argument,
Acknowledge the other side—start with—Although some would argue that…
Rephrase thesis points  Closing sentence that finishes essay

Thesis Sentence
1st Reason
2nd Reason
3 rd Reason

Concrete Detail=

examples, quotes, paraphrasing, proof from the text—You must always “lead into” an example or quote.  In other  words, you have to introduce the example (Odysseus’ behavior can sometimes be described as arrogant when he confesses his name to Polyphemus, “Tell them that it was me, Odysseus that blinded you.”).


Analysis, interpretation, your thoughts about your opinion—why you believe the way you do?  Explain

Concluding Paragraph=

This is the last paragraph of your essay. It rephrases your thesis points.  A closing sentence that may include a final comment about  your topic.

Persuasive Essay Conclusion=

In a persuasive essay, you need to summarize the opposing argument, and acknowledge the other side—start with—Although some would argue that…

Essay Prewriting Techniques

Prewriting techniques are meant to help students get warmed up and start a free flow of ideas. This should be a low-stakes exercise, with just participation points awarded, if any, to cut down on anxiety or worrying about getting it “wrong.”

Copy the handouts for the students, or have them use their own paper. You may want to pass out the clustering example as a handout or use it as an overhead.
The reason short time limits are given on each exercise is because students should work quickly and spontaneously, and not over think each topic. Reassure students that no idea is too silly to write down. The point is to keep the ideas flowing.

Personal Brainstorming List:
Before beginning, have students make a list from 1 – 10 on their paper. Remind them that they should choose a topic that is meaningful to them and related to something in their lives. Then give them two minutes to think of as many possible topics as they can.

Group Brainstorming:
After Personal Brainstorming, have students form groups of 3 – 5 people. Give them
about 10 minutes to share their lists and ask each other questions. The students should get feedback on what the most interesting topics are, or what they liked to talk about the most. Ask them to write this down on their papers also.

Ask the students to choose two topics from their brainstorming session. For the first
topic, have them draw a circle in the middle of their papers. Then give them two minutes to make clusters of related ideas. In the example, you can see that the student started with “Images in the media” and branched off to different ideas.

Do a second cluster the same way with another topic. Ask the students to circle a section of one of the clusters that interests them the most.

Free write:
Give the students three minutes to write as much as they can on the ideas they circled on one of their clusters. Then have them re-read the free write, circle the most interesting thing, and start with that idea on another three-minute free write. If time allows, do the same thing for another round.

When free writing, students should never stop writing, even if they run out of things to say about their topic. If this happens, tell students to write “I can’t think of what to write next…” or something similar. Spelling, punctuation, and grammar don’t count.

Most essays, whether they are research papers, compare and contrast, or persuasive, will depend on an argument. To make sure students do not simply write an informational essay, have them do the last pre-writing activity when they have narrowed down their choices to two or three topics.

Ask the students to write down a topic, and an argument, that they will make. Using the example in the cluster, a student could write as the topic “media and eating disorders.” An argument could be “media images can be a cause for eating disorders in girls.” The opposition might be “eating disorders are caused by a mental illness and not the media.” This exercise helps students think through whether their topics have an argument and what direction their papers might take. Of course the ideas will change as they start researching and delving into their topics, but they will have a possible direction in mind.

Opinion Essays…Come to Life

Learning Goals & Standards Addressed
-Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure in which ideas are logically grouped to support the writer’s purpose.
-Provide logically ordered reasons that are supported by facts details.
-Link opinion and reasons using words, phrases, and clauses (e.g., consequently, specifically)
-Provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented.
-With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1 -3 up to and including grade 5)

As an indicator of understanding, students should be able to…
– Develop a logical arguable claim.
-Use different print and/or non-print sources to compare and contrast two sides of their arguable claim.
-Organize notes into paragraphs using the Opinion Essay Organizer.
-Write a rough draft of the essay citing evidence from their sources to support their claim and refute their counterclaim.
-Revise and edit their rough drafts, including revising their Introduction Paragraph.
-Create a Final Draft based upon their revised and edited rough draft.
-Design a VoiceThread project, using the finished copy of their Opinion Essay, to apply what they’ve learned from their research.

Editing Checklist

___ My spelling, capitalization AND end punctuation were looked over by:___________________________
By signing above, this person confirms that they have looked over your paper to check the following:
____ There are Capitals at the beginning of every sentence.
____ There is an end mark at the end of every sentence.
____ Everything is spelled correctly.

Sentence Fluency:
___ My Sentences mostly begin with different words.
___ If I repeated anything, it was for effect.
___ If read aloud, you can hear a rhythm behind my sentences.

___ My Introduction “hooks” the reader in some way.
___ All of my ideas are presented in a logical sequence.
___ Each paragraph is ONE topic and all details are about that topic.
___ My Conclusion leaves the reader satisfied AND refers back to the main points in my paper.

___ My spelling, capitalization AND end punctuation were looked over by:
By signing above, this person confirms that they have looked over your paper to check the following:
____ There are Capitals at the beginning of every sentence.
____ There is an end mark at the end of every sentence.
____ Everything is spelled correctly.

Sentence Fluency:
___ My Sentences mostly begin with different words.
___ If I repeated anything, it was for effect.
___ If read aloud, you can hear a rhythm behind my sentences.

___ My Introduction “hooks” the reader in some way.
___ All of my ideas are presented in a logical sequence.
___ Each paragraph is ONE topic and all details are about that topic.
___ My Conclusion leaves the reader satisfied AND refers back to the main points in my paper.

Writing Hooks for Your Essays

A HOOK is a very important part of your essay. You can create suspense with your hook, making the reader want to read more! Do you think these Intro Paragraph Hooks are Dull or Exciting? Read each of the hooks then cut them out. You will need to glue each hook under the category of Dull or Exciting.

Note: Some of the hooks are for narrative essays, creative stories. Other hooks are written for explanatory essays or research reports.

The Hooks
Do you know much about dolphins? Read this essay to find out more.

The wind was blowing through my hair as I glanced down from the top of the Eiffel

Tower at the gleaming city of Paris below.

I heard a knock, knock, knock at the door. I peered out the window and realized, “Uh oh!”

I am going to tell you everything I learned about volcanoes.

I’m black and white, fluffy, and I have four legs. Are you curious to find out who I am?

This essay is all about the important island of Sicily.

Do you know about a dangerous animal that lives in the Amazon River?

Here’s a hint about this animal: it likes to eat humans.

The great white shark is a fascinating animal.

“Watch out!” I shouted to my sister below. “Help,” she cried, as her foot started to slip toward the edge of the cliff.

I will tell you a funny story about a guy named Leonard.

Do you know about a chemical substance that is explosive enough to destroy an entire building in under three seconds?

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sophia.

Flying through the air at full speed, the harrier jet is one of the fastest military planes.

“I’m not afraid of the dark. I promise I’m not afraid of the dark,” I
told myself as I ran through the pitch-black field alone.

4 Ways to “hook” your readers

1. Strong Mental Image or Picture
Imagine the delicious smell of hot chocolate wafting across the room on a chilly December night or biting into a warm chocolate chip cookie right out of the oven. Imagine a room filled with piles of chocolate different shades and flavors.

2. Interesting Facts or Statistics About the Topic.
Chocolate has been known to lower your risk of stroke and has been proven to help you breathbetter.

3. Interesting Quote
“There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate.” Linda Grayson

4. Rhetorical Question
Did you know that your health could be directly related to chocolate?


Italian Lessons Reviews

Of all the learning Italian programs I have come across, my favorite is Rocket Italian. This the program for learning Italian in least time possible. I won’t go on about it too much here, you can read the full review below, but make sure you check his site out. I don’t think you can find a better solution to learning Italian on the internet.

Below, you will find reviews of the top 3 Italian learning packages on the internet. I know, because I’ve done the research.

All of these products will help you develop your Italian language skills and I’ve ranked them in my order of preference.

Rocket Italian Review

Rating:Rocket Italian Rating - 5 Stars




Rocket Italian Review

Rocket Italian is my top most recommendation for anybody who wants to master the Italian language. Designed as a course to take you from novice level to an intermediate level in less than eight weeks, this stuff delivers the best. I have had a number of students who have followed this with my classes and the results have been amazing.

As a Italian Teacher, I know that students have biggest difficulty with mastering things like Italian Grammar and Vocabulary. Learning pronunciation is also a tricky issue. Rocket Italian solves these issues effectively with audio courses and software. There are interactive games that make learning vocabulary a breeze.

Other thing that helps you learn Italian really fast with Rocket Italian is the fact that you can learn at your own pace. Unlike a classroom session where you are forced to learn at the pace of the rest of the the class, with Rocket Italian you can go with your comfort level.

Even though I have mentioned this course as the best course for learning Italian fast, it does not stops there. For those who want to take their Italian to next level, Rocket Italian covers the advanced topics equally well. The technical aspects of grammar, colloquial usage, pronunciation are equally well covered.

I really can’t recommend Rocket Italian any stronger, if you want to take your Italian to the next level, then go check out the site today. At $99 (for a limited time), this stuff is nearly available for free. Other comparable packages like Rosetta Stone or PimsleurItalian cost from $500 to $1000 and provide lesser value for money. There is no waiting time and it is available to get you started right now.

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Rosetta Stone Italian Review

This is my second favourite product because it’s quite comprehensive. Compared to Rocket Italian this offers lesser value for money, but they have also done a fairly good job – much better than paying a couple of hundred dollars for classes.

However, this product requires you to be online, a big handicap. I could not listen to it in car or load it up my mp3 player. I won’t recomment this to those people who cannot stick to long hours on computer.

Rosetta Stone has a reputation in field of linguistic training and they have lived up to the reputation. However, if you want to buy only one product that meets all your needs, Rocket Italian is the product to get!

Pimsleur Italian

Rating:Pimsleur Italian Rating - 3 Stars

Pimsleur Italian Review

The Pimsleur course was designed by Dr Pimsleur quite a while ago and he’s done a great job. In the full package, there is over 100 20 minute audio lessons. These will take you from novice to confident speaker in less than 3 months.

However the price tag for this product was too heavy for a student like me. Priced at nearly ten times the price of Rocket Italian, the program lost its value.

If you can afford a grand price tag, this is the program. I felt that with Rocket Italian available, there are much better places to spend that kind of money.